i really like the composition of this one - i struggled to stop working on it
It does have a good start indeed. Maybe give her a spear to lean on, or something to make her presence more… Just more. Or the character would work is it is next to another one.
@KIRE - not sure what “more” you’re after. I tried a spear, but the straight line is fighting with the existing flow regardless of the angle i tried.
I’ll try some other things to bring more attention to her - like increasing the highlight on her and maybe the contrast).
Nice values. She gets the attention in the layout, If I may comment, I find the right side a bit empty may be it will be alright when you fill in the details.
For now i’ve colorized it (blue - yellow gradient) and started cleaning up some of the details, refining some of the lights and shapes.