this is a panel from a webtoon I’m making, my very first one in fact. I’d like some opinions on the art style, and maybe if there are any veterans around, some hacks/pro techniques to speed up my workflow.
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This is amazing. I love your coloring and how you use the vertical nature of webtoon for storytelling that kick to eagle line pretty cool.
If I have a critique its the two red bubble at top. black on red looks cool but get hard to read. it also melds to his hair - the one in his hair. I almost missed it 
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I love the format. And the way you lead the viewer’s eye downward with the eagle is genius. Very enjoyable to look at.
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Eagle looks awesome
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Does not look bad at all. Actually i am a bit intrigued since its an anime style with soccer combination
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These look really cool! I have been meaning to do a spin off of one of my favorite web comics but i can not draw at all. I can draw a decent head but whenever i draw a body it looks weird and demented. I have been practicing on Sketchpad on my school computer. Here’s to the hopes that i improve!
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Well, the word bubbles are colored because I wanted to color code the bubbles based on the character that’s speaking/thinking them. I say it done in UnOrdinary and I thought it was a genius idea. You can just see the bubble and know who’s saying the lines
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if you guys want to read the webtoon, it’s called “Last Year of Highschool” on webtoon.
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/last-year-of-highschool/list?title_no=820633
I’d like it if you guys could comment on the art as a whole. I hate to say it, but I just took the best looking strip out of the whole thing lol.
it’s also only 3 episodes right now, so you can give me your thoughts on the story’s start too.
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