All right, another added to the FanArt Collection!
In Latinoamerica I think Dragon Ball defined the childhood of most people my age! And my favorite part of Dragon ball (Although it has so many moments) Is the beginning, you know the sense of adventure!! I liked Bulma a lot in the beginning. She was the catalyst of everything after all! And she was so independent and shameless 
I struggled with the Moto, and changed the composition from my original sketch. The sketch looked more dynamic, but I wanted to play a little more with the shapes of the Background and more because I liked the Colors so I wanted to show a little more of it!
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Hi there, great work like always. I think you did great with the motorbike, just the scale is off by quite a bit. This is also actually my problem too, and it’s making me insane learning the correct perspective so I can put objects in a scene and not look detached to one another.
I did some test edit, I hope it is okay. The change isn’t much other than scaling up Bulma and parts of the handle and dashboard, also a bit tidying up the background after the transform.
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@kacart Thank you so much!
@ynr_nohara
You are totally right!!! You know in the sketch the scale was better!. I don’t know why I changed it midway. I’ll look at the video process. Maybe I can learn a thing or two!
Thank you so much! Really!
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No problem, probably you’re already tired when painting it so your judgement got skewed.
I’ve been trying to develop a process where I can be more objective when reviewing my own work, but so far only taking a nap or sleep between drawing session work consistently. I have very little endurance compared to normal person, so around 1 hour into a drawing session my observation skill already unreliable.
Probably asking friend(s) who also draw to do quick check is good too. But some people can’t do that, and some won’t do that 
unfortunately.
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Yeah. I really don’t have anyone to ask, sadly 
. And I try to paint many paintings at the same time (like 5-10), to have a different perspective given by time! To prevent things like this to happen! And it does help in some ways! But yeah. sometimes you are just unable to spot your own mistakes. I also liked the feedback about the foreground values that you gave me. It made me realize that it was too dark for that scene.
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