Beramea Altamont
High Elf / Forge Domain Cleric
Looking for feedback. When you are so close to a project sometimes you can’t see it anymore 
Thanks!
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Love the work! If I were to make any suggestion, I would say add some bounce light. He’s standing on very bright sand, so there would be some reflected light which you could use to bring out the face better. I would also add some transparency (or change the blending mode) to the drop shadow, so it looks like he’s standing on the sand and not on some weird solid gray shape in the middle of the sand. Of course those are little things. Overall looks much better than any of my DnD concept characters 
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Thank you. The bounce light is a great idea.
first of all i want to tell you i really liked the drawing. The outfit, the pose everything is very creative. regardless of whether it can be improved or not.
I bring here a test I did. It is not exactly a suggestion, much less a criticism. It’s a test, an exercise that was very interesting to do. I hope it can be useful in some way for you 
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this is great thank you.
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you are welcome! and please continue drawing this character