Tips?
Okay, for questions like yours, you should set the critique-wanted tag, also it is better to use a catchy heading and to ask your questions in the post (by the way, that also fits better with the forum rules).
A post gives more room to formulate your question, you can ask specific things, etc.
Michelist
Shading is really about lighting, about how light interacts with the forms and illuminate things. You might need to study the basics, like how to shade a sphere basics.
im new ish to this forums how do i put the crit wanted (thx in advance)
im good with grafite shading, not so much with digi idk the tools necessary for it
You are member since October last year … 
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Michelist
You can do very similar to how you do it with pencil but that would not be the most optimal way.
Since you are doing cell shading, a better way would be to do the shading in another layer bellow the line work. Paint the shadow colors in and erase until you get the proper shadow shapes.
yes but i posted rarely and not that often and took many months break like almost a year
LOL, I was in a hurry when I looked that up, your last post was in October last year.
LOL, we both tend to have issues with time, from end of October to your new account creation, ~ three days ago, is not almost a year, but ~ a half.
Michelist