Drawn for a series of works by friends.（为朋友的作品系列绘制的。）
First drawn, poorly drawn. I think I should be able to gradually improve the level by constantly drawing.（初次绘制，绘制得不好。我想应该能够通过不断绘制得到水平的逐渐提高。）
Use pen and paper to sketch lines, scan to my computer, and color with Krita.（使用纸与笔打草稿描线，扫描至我的电脑之后，使用Krita进行上色。）
… Just don’t scold me.（…不要骂我就好。）
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I like to see how you develop. Your pictures are many times better than the first ones you posted here in the forum. Something that may have to be just so, I’m not an expert on furries, but is perceived by me as unnatural, that is the exit of the tail from the jacket/top (in picture 003). It gives the impression that the jacket is the origin of the tail, instead of the jacket allowing the tail to pass through. You might think the tail is “straight” on.
But all in all you have improved a lot, I love to see when people make progress with what they do. You positively surprised me and impressed me a lot, congratulations on that.
Michelist
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Translated with DeepL.com:
我喜欢看你的作品。你的照片比你在论坛上发布的第一张要好很多倍。我不是毛皮动物方面的专家，但我觉得有一点可能必须完全一样，那就是尾巴从夹克/上衣的出口处（图片 003）不自然。这给人的印象是，夹克是尾巴的起源，而不是夹克允许尾巴穿过。人们可能会认为尾部是 "直 "着的。
但总的来说，你进步很大，我喜欢看到人们在工作中取得进步。你给我带来了惊喜，给我留下了深刻的印象，祝贺你。
米开朗基罗
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I like it! It’s ambitious to draw a whole story. I think this is a great way to improve. You have a goal (to tell the story) and your drawings will naturally follow.
Why didn’t you try to draw the lineart in Krita too? You prefer pencil and paper for this step?
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Thank you very much…（非常感谢…）
Your response gave me the motivation to keep drawing this cartoon.（您的回复给予了我继续将这副漫画绘制下去的动力。）
I’ll post it all here when I’ve done it all.（全部绘制完毕之后，我还会发到这里。）
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Thanks a lot…
I’m used to using pen and paper to draw line drawings, and it’s more efficient for me.（我已经习惯了使用纸和笔来绘制线稿，另外对我来讲，也更加有效率。）
It is nice to see you start and continue your goal, and also trying new stuff.
(很高興看到你開始並持續你的目標，同時也在嘗試新的東西。)
Looking forward to see your next piece 
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(期待看到你的下一幅作品 
)
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Thank you so much… After this comic is all drawn, it will be posted again… Although it may be a month or two later.（非常感谢…这篇漫画全部绘制完毕之后，还会再发一次…虽然可能是一两个月之后的事情。）
@Lesqwe56
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