Hi , i m trying out drawing something new and here is the results:)
I will be glad for your feedback
I will be glad for your feedback
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Welcome, @TheMOON.
That’s a nice cat. And I like the way you added shading to the blanket to give it some form.
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Hello @TheMOON and welcome to the forum 
As it is, or maybe with a little more work, your drawing could be an entry for the October monthly challenge:
Monthly Art Challenge – October 2024 – Topic: “Buried, Stuck, or otherwise Swallowed”
If the cat had a mouse’s tail hanging out of it’s mouth then it would give double the relevance.
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@AhabGreybeard something like this ?
Yes but the mouse is not hidden with only a small part showing to identify what it is. It’s almost fully visible.
It’s your painting so you can do whatever you like in it
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I really like you idea with the mouse tail and I m trying put it on to my drawing.
Right now maybe it doesnt look ideal but i will try to improve it
I don t know how feel about this attempt
I will be grateful for your feedback 
I don’t know why you put a spoiler blur on it, but you did
I think it looks good and has a presentation in line with the Challenge requirements.
I do think that for a final entry then more of the surrounding blanket could be shown, maybe with more folds to make it clear that it’s not a snow drift or something.
I notice that the cat’s eyes are not even. The one on the left seems to be looking up a lot but the one on the right is looking slightly up.
Also, this topic must not have the final entry in it because posting your image in another topic is not allowed during the Challenge.
You can post further development work in the WIP and Discussion topic:
Monthly Art Challenge WIPs and Discussion Thread – October 2024
The rest is up to you
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Thanks
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